Some people believe that to reduce the amount of time people
spend commuting (travelling to work), parks and gardens close to city
centres should be replaced by apartment buildings for commuters to live
in. However, others disagree with this.
Discuss both these views and
give your own opinion.
population augmenting at mushrooming rate, therefore people have to spend several hour's for travelling to work place.However there are predominantly two contrasting views where a section of society vehemently deems that park and garden should be replaced into apartment building, while other emphasize it should not be done and I support second view therefore my notion would be justified in ensuring paragraph.
To commence with, garden and parks make living environment better. Apparently, most of children like to spend their time in park and garden because it is best place to heal with nature. Moreover, garden and park's also help to provide fresh oxygen. Secondly, in city the pollution level is high but with the help of trees and garden they can make living conditions perfect. Furthermore, parks and garden momentarily used as a relaxation area or sometimes people go their for peaceful environment. apart from this, recently survey conducted by dr. Smith in Oxford University, he had found that 80% of people spend their free time in parks or in garden .
Conversly, some believe that parks and garden close to city it should be convert into apartment building for reducing time saving, for supporting this view there are several reasons are there. First and foremost, people can save time and can reach work place in time. Not only time saving but also cost saving, for instance if person living at walking distance from work place then he or she can reach to work place by walking, due to this pollution can be decline.
Thus, warping up discussion by taking each and everything in my consideration I can say that replacing garden and parks into apartment for reducing travelling time is not best method, it will have negative effect on environment and also harmful for humans.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, while, apart from, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1502.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07432432432 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65839362201 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570945945946 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 99.4739985569 49.4020404114 201% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 125.166666667 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8333333333 7.06120827912 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.411288033299 0.244688304435 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146345627603 0.084324248473 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0714085018639 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233441695816 0.151304729494 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394213470908 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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