It is true that, in this contemporary era, volunteer work are being gained lots of popularity because some introspect that it is good for individual's as well as societies. However, unpaid work should be done by teenagers this is the talk of many people because it creates a great impact on individual's or on societies. Furthermore, according to my perspective, it has numerous of demerits and I totally disagreed with it.
To commence with, if children would start working as a volunteer. In addition to, it creates bad effects on their studies because sizeable majority of people have to do plethora of extra circulram activities in their school or they have pressure of their studies. Moreover, they would feel lack of weakness, laziness so they endeavour to play in their free time rather than doing volunteer work. Another reason could be, it is their starting age for becoming mature and if they would work in free and would not get anything so their belief would be broken. Thirdly, students bodies are not physically fit in school time and if they would do hardwork then it impacts on their body structure. To exemplify, according to a survey, it can be manifested that, more than 52% percent children have study pressure along with volunteer work which ruining their mental ability.
Looking on the other view, there are some advantages as well. First and foremost, reduction in labour cost, children do work in companies without taking money. Additionally, companies can easily give money in charity, to improve some infrastructure, on education and so on which they would save. Secondly, if they do free work and start meeting with new people so it assists to create a good confidence level in them. For instance, when I was a child. I used to do lots of volunteer work and different types of people used to give compliments to me which helped me to boost up my confidence level.
On a concluding note, undoubtedly children also get benefits from volunteer work which enhance their confidence and so on yet, we must understand that we cannot force teenagers to do volunteer work and it has overabundance of disadvantages instead of advantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, well, for instance, in addition, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1799.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 364.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94230769231 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80698121143 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535714285714 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.363324896 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.4375 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.625 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303033645023 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0973602116332 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465017119125 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177140185932 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0367429105833 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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