The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year

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The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year

The illustrations compare the layout of an airport site at the moment and in the following year with some projected renovation

Overall, there will be major alterations including the relocation of some recent amenities and the construction of new ones, in order to elevate the flying experience of passengers

Looking at the current airport conditions, the main hall is separated into two halves: departure hall to the left and arrival hall to the right. While there are a check-in counter and a café situated on the left-hand side and right-hand side of the departure hall respectively, the hall for arrivals is empty. After passing the security and passport control areas which are located above these halls, passengers can reach the walkway leading them to 8 different departure gates

Regarding the airport refurbishment, the two gates for departures and arrivals will be duplicated. The cafe will be moved to the southeast corner of the departure hall and the check-in counter will be relocated to the previous location of the old café, which will be opposite a bag drop area. Remarkably, the arrival hall is planned to be equipped with new facilities to the east with a café, an ATM and a car hire in the order from top to bottom. The security and passport control will remain unchanged, while shops will emerge at the existence of these areas. Moreover, many significant transformations are projected when there will not only be more than a twofold increase in the departure gates but also a replacement of the walkway to sky trains in the middle of the Y-shaped corridor

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 173, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'counters'?
Suggestion: counters
...o the right. While there are a check-in counter and a café situated on the left-hand si...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, regarding, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 1.00243902439 898% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1328.0 965.302439024 138% => OK
No of words: 265.0 196.424390244 135% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01132075472 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83012326968 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 106.607317073 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520754716981 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 283.868780488 147% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 22.4926829268 164% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 105.714478764 43.030603864 246% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 189.714285714 112.824112599 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.8571428571 22.9334400587 165% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 5.23603664747 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143989119211 0.215688989381 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0647675739095 0.103423049105 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040823828665 0.0843802449381 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0910511212775 0.15604864568 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0551108091323 0.0819641961636 67% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.1 13.2329268293 159% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.92 61.2550243902 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 10.3012195122 172% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.37 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.06136585366 117% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 40.7170731707 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 11.4329268293 254% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.9970731707 153% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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