.Some people think people should choose their job based on the income in order to provide security to their family.
Do you think money is an important factor when choosing a job.
What factors should be considered.
It has often been argued that if you are earning well, you are capable enough to keep your family out of danger from every aspects of life and in turn happiness is gained. To be very precise, I believe that money plays a vital role when deciding on job. Moreover, factors like stress free environment and job satisfaction are considered to be dissimilar constituents when relying on job.
To begin with, it has commonly been noticed that money is required to buy everything starting from health insurance to a house to live in. There are plethora of reasons when people want to work, where they get enormous amount of money to fulfill their luxury. Moreover, youngsters dream job correlates to lucrative amount of money. For example, a person, who is working in American express, a MNC gets highly paid, however, an employee of basic company like Internet Moguls are not gainful. Thus, in order to fulfill needs and dreams pay scale should be high.
Furthermore, it has been seen while, you have a lot of money, you cannot concentrate because of the pressure created by your top management. All the efforts applied goes in vain and it becomes difficult keep healthy lifestyle. Also, people whose monthly income is beyond expectation are not able to give family time. For instance, a survey done by Times of India, commits that 60% of suicide happens where people cannot handle work pressure. Not only these people suffer from depression but also they fail to explain what is bothering them. Therefore, distinct elements has a binding role to participate in choosing money or job satisfaction.
To recapitulate, I would rather say, who works for money cannot be neglected because it gives all necessity and luxury required. At the same time the health should be kept in mind as it is well said, “health is wealth”.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1519.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59557175126 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645161290323 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.0374115687 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.9375 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.375 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5625 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282148547299 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0790134992646 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528257429033 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146453856793 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483327916346 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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