Some individuals are of the opinion that undesirable circumstances such as an unpleasant job or low salary should be accepted while others think that pursues a solution is better. Both views will be thoroughly discussed and give the opinion the situation.
On the one hand, it is argued that people should accept the adverse circumstances. In fact, these individuals are concerned about the change and tend to lack courage. For instance, some people stick with their job even though they are under work pressure and in displeasing conditions. Because they are worried about the stability of money and unemployment. Besides, change will bring a risky challenge and massive effort. They are concerned about their future, especially in a few serious cases such as severe disease or economic downturns, it could be insecure and impossible to change the situation. Moreover, there are some unsatisfactory conditions that are difficult to improve. For instance, it is hard to save a person from an extreme infection or premature dying. Consequently, they accept the awful state of affairs without making an attempt to enhance it.
On the other hand, there are positive conditions that may be improved if we make an attempt to find a strategy. They will cope with more challenges when solving a solution but it is worth. It is required strengths and opportunities. For instance, we should pursue a better job if the job is unsuitable for us. Pursuing a solution is highly praised owing to positive emotions and long–term health.
In conclusion, I believe both sides of the arguments have merits but it is essential to enhance undesirable circumstances and seek possible improvement.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1364.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12781954887 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95465762754 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575187969925 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8089349258 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.666666667 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279375724519 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0991931757879 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670290963599 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160813580341 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0841923671284 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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