The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry.
The diagram depicts the way in which bricks are produced for the building industry
Overall, the process consists of 2 main stages, commencing with clay being digged and culminating in delivery
To begin, the clay used to make the bricks is dug up from the ground by a large digger. This clay is then placed onto a metal grid, which is used to break up the clay into smaller pieces, with assists of a roller. Following this, a combination of sand and water is added to the clay, the mixture is then formed into bricks by either placing it into a mould or using a wire cutter.
The bricks are then put into an oven to dry for 24 to 48 hours before undergoing a heating and cooling process. They are heated in a kiln at a moderate temperature of around 200C to 980C, which is then risened to a higher level, at between 870C to 1300C. Afterwards, these bricks are moved to a cooling chamber and stay there for 2 to 3 days prior to being packaged and subsequently delivered to constructions
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 410, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 32.9175257732 15% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 817.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46448087432 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48820562835 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595628415301 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 6.0 0.824742268041 728% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 16.3608247423 183% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.4485276864 44.8134815571 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.166666667 76.5299724578 178% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5 16.8248392259 181% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 4.34317383033 15% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 7.41237113402 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247428687117 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11146620597 0.0766984524023 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0990783862483 0.0603063233224 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166083794475 0.12726935374 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130509286027 0.0580467560999 225% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 8.37731958763 177% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.41 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.18 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.0 8.54432989691 164% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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