It is true that, in this contemporary era, products advertisements are being gained lots of popularity in all over the world. However, plethora of products are being launching in different categories by businesses and they are claiming that all products are new in numbers of ways. According to my perspective, it is totally negative development which is effecting lots of people mentally as well as physically.
To commence with, attractive advertisements play an indispensable role in everyone's life. Sizeable majority of people prefer to watch television where they watch these ads and after that without contemplating so much they start purchasing those products which is not usefull for them in their future. Furthermore, after realising people do not trust on these types of brands. Another reason could be, overabundance of products are being sold in new packets only by business and they are saying these products are totally new. Moreover, it means they are not following their ethical rules. To exemplify, according to a survey, it can be manifested that pepsi company was seeling expiry cold drinks in new packets in cheap rates.
Looking at the other view, businesses are doing these things because of numerous reasons. First and foremost, competition is being escalated in markets at an unprecedented rate. They have to show that they are doing something good for people for surving in competition environment. Additionally, they have to launch new products for fighting with their competitors. Eventually, they want to generate more money that is why they manipulate public sometimes which is not a better option. For instance, Tesla company always make new advertisement because Elon Musk knows very well what people want and what we are providing. That is why within a few years this electric car company is the well known company in all over the world.
On a concluding note, undoubtedly making ads or showing our products are best, it is good if you know the needs of public and you want to generate good revenues yet, we must understand that businesses should follow their ethical rules because they do not have any right to manipulate public. First, they should take some certificate that whatever they are claiming in their product description that is correct or not.
- Some people think parents should supervise their children s activity closely while others believe that children should have more freedom discuss both views and give your own opinion 73
- Some people think parents should supervise their children s activity closely while others believe that children should have more freedom discuss both views and give your own opinion 78
- Some people think parents should supervise their children s activity closely while others believe that children should have more freedom discuss both views and give your own opinion 73
- in their advertising businesses nowadays usually emphasize that their products are new in some ways Why is this Do you think this is a positive or negative development 78
- In some countries more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of a house or a building they are living in What are the reasons for this How can people research this 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, so, well, for instance, you know, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 13.1623246493 236% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1925.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 373.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16085790885 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84063913828 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54691689008 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 602.1 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6065057236 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.944444444 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7222222222 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233985026692 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0719404505373 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424680729246 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149409450327 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.016121979769 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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