It is true that, in this contemporary era, products advertisements are being gained lots of popularity in all over the world. However, plethora of products are being launching in different categories by businesses and they are claiming that all products are new in numbers of ways. According to my perspective, it is totally negative development which is effecting lots of people mentally as well as physically.
To commence with, attractive advertisements play an indispensable role in everyone's life. Sizeable majority of people prefer to purchase some vitamin powders for enhancing their muscles power but after taking these people do not feel comfortable and some individuals are having to confront problems related to heart attack, liver problems. Furthermore, after these people do not trust on these types of brands. Another reason could be, overabundance of products are being sold in new packets only by business and they are saying these products are totally new. Moreover, it means they are not following their ethical rules. To exemplify, according to a survey, it can be manifested that pepsi company was seeling expiry cold drinks in new packets in cheap rates.
Looking at the other view, businesses are doing these things because of numerous reasons. First and foremost, competition is being escalated in markets at an unprecedented rate. They have to show that they are doing something good for people for surving in competition environment. Additionally, they have to launch new products for fighting with their competitors. Eventually, they want to generate more money that is why they manipulate public sometimes which is not a better option. For instance, Tesla company always make new advertisement because Elon Musk knows very well what people want and what we are providing. That is why within a few years this electric car company has become a well known company in all over the world.
On a concluding note, undoubtedly making ads or showing our products are superior instead of others, it is pragmatic, if you know the needs of public and you want to generate good revenues yet, we must understand that businesses should follow their ethical rules because they do not have any right to manipulate public. First, they should take some certificate that whatever they are claiming in their product description that is correct or not.
- Some people think parents should supervise their children s activity closely while others believe that children should have more freedom discuss both views and give your own opinion 73
- in their advertising businesses nowadays usually emphasize that their products are new in some ways Why is this Do you think this is a positive or negative development 78
- Some people think parents should supervise their children s activity closely while others believe that children should have more freedom discuss both views and give your own opinion 73
- Some people think parents should supervise their children s activity closely while others believe that children should have more freedom discuss both views and give your own opinion 85
- in their advertising businesses nowadays usually emphasize that their products are new in some ways Why is this Do you think this is a positive or negative development 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, so, well, for instance, you know, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 13.1623246493 228% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1986.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 381.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2125984252 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83699960589 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561679790026 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 626.4 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.4014567326 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.333333333 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11111111111 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249091678433 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737763558199 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429481446824 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154983857553 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0140505819489 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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