Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed rather than to work for a company or organization.
Why might this be a case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?
Thanks to the state-of-the-art civilization, starting up a business has become more possible than ever. As a result, there is a cumulative number of people opting for embarking on their own business instead of being conventional employees. From my perspective, this phenomenon has resulted from numerous factors, some of which will be clarified in this essay along with some anticipated adverse effects.
Amidst a number of reasons, I firmly assumed that the availability of materials and human resources, as well as the exponentially advanced support from technology, are remarkable ones. The more available the materials and workers are, the less investment and initial capital are required for being self-employed. To be more specific, running a small cafeteria is much less challenging due to a multitude of raw materials vendors available to choose from and hiring part-time workers at a low cost is also not a big deal. Furthermore, taking the same example, the ubiquity of online platforms has made room for cloud kitchens which drastically reduce the cost of the rental fee for serving space.
Although it might be an optimistic sign of a developing economy, it probably conceals several potential downsides in both individual and national terms. First, the larger the scale of a new firm is, the more risks the owner is taking. In order words, without adequate experience and thorough consideration, an impulsive decision could lead to failure of firms and even traumatic financial loss. Additionally, uncontrollably long-lasting highly competitive markets will ultimately lead to low inflation which is one of the most hazardous for the domestic economy.
Despite the ease of embarking on operating a business due to tech advances and material and labor force abundance, regardless of what type of manufacture a person will engage in laying a robust groundwork plays a pivotal role. Otherwise, remorseful losses may come up.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, may, so, well, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1639.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3737704918 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1141604266 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659016393443 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6992946743 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.076923077 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4615384615 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23076923077 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187139690456 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574721991278 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597319466099 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0943721737273 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0551400185933 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.26 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.