Some believe technology has made our lives too complex and the solution is to lead a simpler life without technology.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued by some that life has become more and more complicated due to advances in technology and that people had better simplify to lead fulfilling lives. Personally, whereas I agree that technology has resulted in a more complex world, I also believe that it brings about more benefits and therefore should not be eliminated in the contemporary world.
On the one hand, a major reason why technology has complicated life for people today is that it has made them perpetually available. For instance, in earlier times, workers used to have a nine-to-five job and then come home to spend time with their family or enjoy their private life. These days, nevertheless, although their work has been finished, people still turn out to receive email notifications and phone calls from their managers or colleagues and as a result, they are usually snowed under with work and do not have much free time to have a conversation with members in the family, which may lead to constant misunderstanding among them.
On the other hand, it is detrimental to remove technology from daily life. To embark on, the advent of advanced communication technology has facilitated communication among people regardless of geographical distance. A salient example is that during the current situation of COVID-19 pandemic, the Internet allows people to stay connected with others through social media such as Facebook, Twitter, Instagram, etc without having to meet in person. Furthermore, technological advancements have made it more convenient for us to acquire knowledge. For example, in earlier times, people had to waste a lot of time looking for relevant materials in the library to support their work. Nowadays, on the contrary, with the aid of the Internet, we are easy to gain access to infinite sources of information just at the touch of a button.
By way of conclusion, although we are leading a more intricate lifestyle owing to technological breakthroughs, turning away from them will adversely affect our lives. Hence, people should make an effort to use technology wisely in order to live happier, more rewarding lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, look, may, nevertheless, so, still, then, therefore, whereas, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1773.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13913043478 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96691268636 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597101449275 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 572.4 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.7397529111 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.384615385 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5384615385 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.8461538462 7.06120827912 196% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194769141783 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742854189345 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513617484354 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121848772833 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375678347926 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.