the diagram shows the process of producing avocado oil. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevants.
The diagram shows the steps of processing avocado oil.
Overall, avocados underwent 8 stages to become accomplished products - avocado oil, with two main stages of centrifugation.
Initially, avocados are inspected by manipulation, ruling out which has gone off. The eligible ones then go through the washer, and be poured into the crusher to reject the seeds and skins, refining avocado flesh for the blending stage.
After that, from 45 to 50 degree celsius, two stages of centrifugation are conducted, with stage 1 separating liquids from solids, stage 2 splitting oil from water. All the waste from the process, including rotten fruits, seeds and skins, solid waste, is transferred by trucks to the orchard area, where it can disintegrate into a natural fertilizer, except liquid waste from stage 2.
The oil , after being detached, flows through a filter for refining the last time. The pure oil is then extracted into dispensers and poised at being commercialized.
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- Much of the food people eat gets transported from farms thousands of miles away Some believe it would be better for the environment and economy if people only ate food from local farmers Would the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages 75
- the diagram shows the process of producing avocado oil Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevants 66
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...cept liquid waste from stage 2. The oil , after being detached, flows through a f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 32.9175257732 6% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 820.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 155.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29032258065 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88530110615 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.690322580645 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.13402061856 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 1.44329896907 416% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0419001863 44.8134815571 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.5 76.5299724578 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.375 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 4.34317383033 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152007485988 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0911597706231 0.0766984524023 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109193759711 0.0603063233224 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129852281699 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123060706867 0.0580467560999 212% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 8.37731958763 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 8.71597938144 154% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 7.59969072165 122% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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