The diagrams below show the present building of a college and the plan for changes to the college site in the future. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The two diagrams given illustrate the current state of the school and the college’s transformation in 2020.
Overall, the college will become more urbanized, cutting out natural area and providing more options for study halls.
In the present time, the entrance way is in the north of the association approaching through the footpath and along to the garden. On the western side, there is a small car park which will be expanded in 2020. The garden and the footpath will be knocked down to make way for the extension of the college’s inside.
Inside the building, there are classrooms, reception and library running along the eastern side. In the future, the reception will be moved to the center of the building in the direction of the new south entrance, and the library will be relocated to the west to clear the way for 4 new lecture halls. The toilets will be moved to the opposite place that used to be the entrance.
- The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care system in an effort to deal with the health issues involved Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education in the school 73
- Children are now less active in their free time than in the past Therefore sports lessons must be compulsory in schools To what extent do you agree or disagree Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or exper 53
- The diagrams below show the present building of a college and the plan for changes to the college site in the future Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 73
- In many countries around the world life expectancy is increasing Discuss the advantages disadvantages of this situation and give your own opinion 56
- Global warming is one of the biggest threats to our environment What causes global warming What solutions are there for this problem 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...providing more options for study halls. In the present time, the entrance way is...
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Suggestion:
... the extension of the college’s inside. Inside the building, there are classroom...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 32.9175257732 3% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 774.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 162.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77777777778 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57454032548 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 127.690721649 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537037037037 0.622605031667 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 232.2 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.13402061856 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 0.824742268041 728% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.8450789403 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.75 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.25 4.34317383033 6% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107926300313 0.216113520407 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0496658672983 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495817987376 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0753375577568 0.12726935374 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306067430888 0.0580467560999 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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