The diagram below shows the percentage of share of total world production of wheat by Asia, Europe and other part of the world from the years 1840 to 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph depicts that the proportion of wheat production by Asia, Europe and rest of world.
Overall,it can be manifested from The graph that the Asia and Europe had highest percentage of share as compare to other part of world.
Firstly,Asia had highest percentage of share , which was constituted by a half in year 1840.Whereas, Europe and rest of the world produced two fifth and 10 percent.Surprisingly,this trend was considerably decreased from 50 to 30 percent within 4 decade.In contrast, Europe trend for wheat production slightly went up within 8 deacde and reached a high of 50 percentage of share in1920.
Secondly, wheat production of Asia was flactuated within given period and it is escalated from 1920 and 2000, which was one fifth in formal one and two fifth in later one.Moreover, total world production of wheat by other part of the world was gradually rose from 10 percent in 1840 and approximately went up by 12 percent in year 1880. In additionally,this trend was upaward from 30 to 38 percent respectively.
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Suggestion: had the highest
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Suggestion: Surprisingly
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Suggestion: decades
...ecreased from 50 to 30 percent within 4 decade.In contrast, Europe trend for wheat pro...
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Suggestion: trends
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Suggestion: Moreover
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Suggestion: risen
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...12 percent in year 1880. In additionally,this trend was upaward from 30 to 38 percent...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, whereas, in addition, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 863.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98843930636 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.34082096011 2.65546596893 126% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514450867052 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 247.5 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 22.4926829268 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 129.122577422 43.030603864 300% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 172.6 112.824112599 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.6 22.9334400587 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.2 5.23603664747 309% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 1.69756097561 884% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314483654363 0.215688989381 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.185944522226 0.103423049105 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0805399907022 0.0843802449381 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21917975861 0.15604864568 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0224163642255 0.0819641961636 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.4 13.2329268293 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.89 61.2550243902 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.4329268293 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.9970731707 142% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.0658536585 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.