Nowadays young prefer to move to big cities Older people however are the opposite and prefer to stay in the countryside What are positive and negative of this trend
This is fact that lucrative jobs could be find in large cities instead of tiny villages and towns. It is being thought by people that youngsters are immigrating to the urban areas but the older age people love to stay in rural areas. According to me this trend has both the positives and negatives.
On the one hand, There are a couple of positive impacts of this phenomenon that i am going to mention. Firstly, young ones holds degrees from prestigious colleges and universities in which they have devoted their time and efforts. So. After completion of academic qualifications youngsters look for relevant employments to earn bread and butter. That is why, they are settling down in cities which are able to provide jobs to new talent. For example, at present students are opt for different kinds of programmes such as medical line, business line, fashion- designing etcetera and wants to pursue a job in their related field. To be more specific. Most of the industries are opened in huge cities rather than countryside areas as well as majority of health care services are being provided in the urban areas. So, 75% of the adults move towards cities predominantly for seeking jobs. Secondly, as compared to the small villages, cities are facilitated with an attractive infrastructure, health care services, universities and colleges. Consequently, in order to take advantage of those amenities they are moving out to set not only their professional but also personal life. Eventually, so these are big advantages of this trend for young ones.
On the other hand, along with positive impacts this trend also has some negative impacts. First of all, Adults are getting separated from young ones as older people prefers rural areas to spend their rest of life. Whereas, there is nobody to take care of them and also communication gap gets wide as figure for extended families is going down. Besides this, moving towards cities is a imbalance in the population of urban and rural areas across the country as metropolitan cities has large population figures than villages that is problematic for cities especially. To explain more, increasing trend of population has been leading environment pollution and lack of space to reside more people. Last but not least, villages are less developed than cities causing that young talent is immigrating to cities.
To conclude, Although the prevailing trend is a positive development yet it can be said that negative effects can not be ignored as young ones and older people have different interests.
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also, besides, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, as to, for example, such as, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 13.1623246493 213% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2129.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 420.0 315.596192385 133% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06904761905 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52701905584 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7256768075 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545238095238 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 679.5 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4458387868 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.380952381 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.04761904762 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274937654875 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0728807687182 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581788948085 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170925920377 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351215887283 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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