Some people think that childcare centers provide the best services for children of preschool age. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their kids. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
On the one hand , it is true that children schooling in kindergarten has extroverted character and more fluent than children who do not go to preschool age . This is because youngsters have the chance to contact their friends, from that case keep kids joyful. In addition, Kindergarten supplying with the nicest services has the responsibility to protect the safety of children, therefore, children’s parents don’t need to worry about that instead satisfied and peace of mind. For instance, the teacher who looks after the children will have to ensure the children’s secure.
On the other hand, The family has the conditions of grandparents to take care of children is an advantage over other families. To explain this the children receiving care from their grandparents are more pious than the children who lack well cared for family members. As a result, the family sentiment has a significant upwards especially grandparents and grandchild.
In my view, Instead of keeping them in parents' or grandparents ’ aim, parents should send their children to childcare centers. To explain this, children who communicate with their friends will be formed open-minded and braver than children without contact with friends. I think this is the best way for developing children’s behavior.
- In some countries more young adults continue to live with their parents even after they have completed education and found jobs Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages 78
- Some people think that childcare centers provide the best services for children of preschool age Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their kids Discuss both views and give your opinion 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
On the one hand , it is true that children schooling in k...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... children who do not go to preschool age . This is because youngsters have the cha...
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Line 2, column 320, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'upward'?
Suggestion: upward
... the family sentiment has a significant upwards especially grandparents and grandchild....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, therefore, well, for instance, i think, in addition, as a result, in my view, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1088.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 204.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33333333333 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95834658164 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602941176471 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 506.74238477 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.879317948 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.8 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275422501533 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115516732842 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498427605572 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19304527399 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398053789273 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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