Some people think that childcare centers provide the best services for children of preschool age. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their kids. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Opinions diverge on whether grandparents should not look after their grandchildren than give them to childcare centers. Although this sentiment can be justified to some extent, I am of the opposite stance owing to family’s relationship and assurance.
Admittedly, time-saving and peer relationships are two obvious core advantages of letting children to childcare centers. First, some parents are very busy with their work as well as they do not have enough time to look after their kids, so a childcare center is one of the best choices for them. Perceptibly, feeding, teaching and educating are parents’ inevitable tasks which take most of their time; however, childcare centers take over these things effectively. As a result, they can spend their time on other work, and have time to look after themselves. Second, childcare institutions offer a reliable environment for kids to make friends. Due to a large number of kids and physical and intellectual they can participate together so their relationships will be widened. This seems not to be achieved if they are looked after only by their family members.
Despite these aforementioned benefits, I ascertain that letting grandparents to look after children is better than giving them into childcare centers owing to assurance and family’s relationship. Conspicuously, It is safer for children to be cared for by their seniors instead of strange people, so children’s safety can be more assured. Additionally, the old can take care of their grandchildren more meticulously than childcare centers due to the disproportionate figure of toddlers. Besides that, kids can spend more time playing with their relatives and finding out about them; hence, their relationships can get closer day by day. One of the most clear discrepancies between children who are in countrysides and cities is the affections towards their grandparents; rural kids are more emotional with the elderly than the others.
By way of conclusion, notwithstanding advantages from childcare centers, family members are much better in looking after children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, hence, however, if, look, second, so, well, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1771.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44923076923 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14410352601 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8750149343 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.066666667 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53333333333 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270147559315 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10015129407 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044491627147 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167445784002 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351566224185 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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