Some people think that childcare centers provide the best services for children of preschool age. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their children. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
People are now swamped with tons of workload, so they do not spend enough time looking after their children. There are those who opine that nursery schools supply the best services for kids, while others believe that kids should be raised at home by family members. This essay will shed light on both views before making a final note.
There is not any difficulty to understand why many parents have confidence in babysitters in nursery centers. To begin with, teachers at childcare schools have experienced training courses thereby they have fully equipped with professional skills in educating children such as a wealth of knowledge on nutrition balance, and protect kids from dangerous situations, and so on. For instance, in the case of children swallowing weird things, the teachers can use first aid skills to help children out of danger. In addition, these centers have specialized facilities, cutting-edge equipment, and other educational programs that create a friendly environment accelerating the growth of kids comprehensively. For example, they are taught how to take care of plants, and some simple ways to minimize environmental pollution.
On the other hand, children have always received the best care at home from families because blood is thicker than water. Grandparents always give boundless love to their grandchildren, thus their parents are able to wholeheartedly devote themselves to their work and thrive. Furthermore, most grandparents have retired and stayed at home, so they have much time to play with kids. As a result, parents do not need to send them to nursery schools. Not only reduce the cost of babysitting but also take advantage of lower-income families.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that both sides of the argument have their positive points. However, I’m inclined to believe that the method to send kids to kindergarten will bring more benefits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, look, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1602.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30463576159 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86440492568 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64238410596 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6239189639 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.8 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1333333333 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7333333333 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232831365829 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673746098371 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448530404483 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130844654464 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517631217229 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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