Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this day and age, technology has developed rapidly which might enable humans to make a wide range of decisions. Therefore, I am an advocate who strongly supports the aforementioned idea.
The first and foremost reason why people are prone to have many choices is the technological development. Along with this development, it is obvious that nowadays there are many ways people can flexibly choose to pursue. For instance, it can be seen in this pandemic that officers or workers can have various options in choosing the workplace due to being unable to commute to offices. Employees can work from home through the Internet or distinctly observe machines, the work progress via the CCTV.
In addition, on account of this development, people’s mindset might have also changed. In other words, individuals especially youngsters are more open-minded and more confident about themselves, which may encourage them to broaden their horrizon by trying to do new things that never have been done before. Namely, Grap is the company which has converted the traditional and conventional form of public transportation to a high-level one with many advanced technologies such as Grab bikes, Grab cars which allow passengers to book and give feedback via an online app. In fact, this company has received a big success, which might prove a variety of available choices in career prospects.
In conclusion, I strongly agree with the idea that people are able to make various decisions and in which may be one of the positive signs of the country’s development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, may, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1306.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16205533597 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89520228199 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632411067194 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.7091483126 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.727272727 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.72727272727 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13425961502 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0545685592522 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559521586633 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0695855856642 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046253885016 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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