The table and bar chart show how journey times in a city center changed
after improvements were made to the transport network, an the costs of using
different forms of transport in the city.
The diagram shows us how the time transition in the downtown area has changed as transportation network improvements are adopted by the city, along with that table shows us the cost of different modes of transport.
Looking at the table, we can immediately see that the improvement of the transport network helps trams and buses reduce a lot of travel time in the city, the reduction time is about 5 minutes, but on the contrary, it increases the travel time of taxis and cars by about 3 to 5 minutes. Before upgrading the transport system, the tram ride time is twice as long as the car ride, but after upgrading the transport network, the travel time of these two vehicles is almost the same. For this reason, the cost of traveling by taxi as well as car is much higher than the other means. The most obvious thing is that the taxi fare is 4 times higher than the bus. This difference is smaller for car but also about 2 times higher.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 5, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'for outdoor'.
Suggestion: for outdoor
... to stay at home rather than going out for outdoor for outdoor activities. The following are some of t...
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Line 2, column 59, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...r outdoor activities. The following are some of the reasons for this phenomenon from my po...
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Line 15, column 13, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'A' instead of 'An' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: A
...al to your home. It’s very convenient. An that convenience will harm us. If we st...
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Line 15, column 13, Rule ID: AN_THEN[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'and that'?
Suggestion: And that
...al to your home. It’s very convenient. An that convenience will harm us. If we stay at...
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Line 23, column 7, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: All
...simply go out to meet friends to chat. all of those activities are very good for y...
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Line 25, column 10, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: and
...ay at home of young peole are not good and and we have to fix this situation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, i think, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1404.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44303797468 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18250755061 2.80592935109 78% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481012658228 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3018908984 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.5882352941 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5882352941 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 23.0 4.38176352705 525% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318960039843 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108999866971 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0969868444652 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0989715377522 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0812775242523 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 50.2224549098 156% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 12.4159519038 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.63 8.58950901804 77% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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