Nowadays, offence rate really extremely increasing in the whole world. It has worse consequences when crimes as well as another type of information showed on television and newspapers it should be prohibited by government when shown in media. I disagree with this view, due to the fact that, social media player significant role in humans lifestyle. Apart from this it is act like alarm and help to reducing crime rate in the whole world.
To commence with, thesedays, individuals are busy their work schedule they have no time to meet with each other as well as in case media players superb roll due to the fact that it is a source of knowledge secondly it works as a alarm. Mainly in form individual for what happened around them as well as events extra. Any news of word we can see on the social network. For example, if someone want to abroad but he she does not know very well that place. on the country when he see the information on social media then person will be aware to the crime as well as the atmosphere on that place. consequently these type of media like newspaper television as well as smart phones are beneficial because these news aware to the alternatives.
Moreover with this, benefits act as a protective shield for people. during these kinds of information source provide a plethora of knowledge as well as a confidence to reducing crime problem. To epitome, in rural areas people are not aware to crime as well as offence such as murders kidnapping and raping but when they see this kind of misdemeanour. And also they become conscious of their kids as well as a youngster. Consequently, these news or act like a protective shield.
To conclude, in my opinion social media such as newspaper is well as TV provide information of offence on media is beneficial for humans, due to the fact, that it creates a awareness against crime.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
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Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wants'.
Suggestion: wants
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Suggestion: On
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'sees'.
Suggestion: sees
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Suggestion: Consequently
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: consequently,
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Message: Did you mean 'this news' or 'these newses'?
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, then, well, apart from, for example, kind of, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1531.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68195718654 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66991217364 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519877675841 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7654005955 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6875 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4375 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.3125 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250344026947 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0748876959212 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708635577833 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159216406304 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372834774568 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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