The well-being of a society is enhanced when many of its people question authority.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The Authority should be questioned in order to maintain the well-being of the society. The Authority has executional powers, which directly affect people and thus needs to be questioned and be held responsible for its decisions.
The Chinese proverb has said it right,"Power tends to Corrupt, Absolute Power corrupts Absolutely!".An Authority without accountablity leads to total greed of power and it needs someone to tame it and keep it in control. People can tame it by asking questions. These questions force authorities to comply with the people and work towards their betterment. For instance, USA was badly hit by the COVID-19 Pandemic. The authorities were questioned for the mismanagement of the Pandemic. Many people criticized the Government harshly through various social media platforms. This outrage pressurized the government to take immediate actions to mitigate the problem. Thus shortly after, the pandemic was in control. Thus people exercised their right to questioning and information and forced the Government Authorities to take right steps.
Moreover, Questioning the authorities helps people to exercise their power on the authorities. The Governments nowadays are controlling the people who elected them to power. An active participation of people in the government can force authorities to think before taking any decisons. For instance, Hungary passed an Anti-LGBTQ bill in the 2019, which was heavily criticised by the Hungarian public and it lead to Massive outrages. Such outrages in Hungary were never seen before which lead the authorities to take people for granted.This outrage forced government to rethink on its policies. Thus, questioning the authority can prevent reckless decision making and prevent its adverse effects.
However, Many people argue that Extensive Questioning and criticism demotivates the authority, leading to slowing down of the development process. This might be true, for instance, Many infrastructural projects like the Kudunkulum Nuclear Plant, in India have been delayed due to criticism from Social and Environmental groups. But one needs to understand that, Authorities are for the people and not the other way round. If certain group of people disagree with a development project, there needs to be a logical argument behind it and it can be solved with discussions between Authorities and affected people. Thus questioning the authority opens gateway for a more fruitful discussion facilitating an all inclusive approach to a certain problem.
Thus, Society can decide their well-being by becoming an active questioner to the authorities thus keeping authorities in the control and prevent them from abuse of power. Ultimately, people have their well-being in their own hands.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2359.0 2235.4752809 106% => OK
No of words: 418.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64354066986 5.05705443957 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11184434679 2.79657885939 111% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 215.323595506 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50956937799 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 715.5 704.065955056 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.9346886399 60.3974514979 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2916666667 118.986275619 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4166666667 23.4991977007 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 5.21951772744 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 5.13820224719 272% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263259222138 0.243740707755 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0842005053046 0.0831039109588 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531866484319 0.0758088955206 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173259980301 0.150359130593 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492407040404 0.0667264976115 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.1639044944 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 100.480337079 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.