People can eat a wide variety of food from other regions As a result they are eating a lot of foreign food instead of locally produced food Do you think the advantages of eating foreign foods are more than their harms

In the present scenario, people have a lot of choices foods and vegetables and many times they are put into delimited which food do taste. I believe there are different type of food available into the market. However, people prefer the outside country food than local food. There are a lot of the demarits than merits and I put my day in the following paragraph.
To begin the deliberation, other country food is more popular among the youngster and they mostly like it. There are a lot of foreign food such as Italian pizza, Chinese, noodles and so on. I believe many of international brand shops make in our country. For example, McDonald's outlet is built into the all major cities and it is a American company.
On the other, I believe all people should avoid eating a foreign food and should eating local food because of many reasons. First and foremost, many times foreign food is very expensive compare than street food. Time and again, they do not give a good quality and quantity. If people will not avoid foreign food so, a lot of local sellers become an unemployment. Secondly foreign foods are unhygienic because they involve a lot of gheee and oil. Many times people can not doing any complain towards company due to no one office in our area.
To sum up, my opinion on par with that the all people should give chance to the local farmer for produce your items in front of people.

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IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS General Training
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 218, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...food available into the market. However, people prefer the outside country food t...
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Line 2, column 233, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...elieve many of international brand shops make in our country. For example, McDona...
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Line 2, column 331, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ilt into the all major cities and it is a American company. On the other, I bel...
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Line 3, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...it is a American company. On the other, I believe all people should avoid eating...
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Line 3, column 473, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'can' requires base form of the verb: 'do'
Suggestion: do
...heee and oil. Many times people can not doing any complain towards company due to no...
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Line 3, column 499, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eople can not doing any complain towards company due to no one office in our area...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, secondly, so, for example, such as, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1146.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.584 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33546569232 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 373.5 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.668450637 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.4 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.86666666667 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.470946706209 0.244688304435 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159979922383 0.084324248473 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119555418375 0.0667982634062 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251702014964 0.151304729494 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.149262069768 0.056905535591 262% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.0946893788 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 218, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...food available into the market. However, people prefer the outside country food t...
^^
Line 2, column 233, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...elieve many of international brand shops make in our country. For example, McDona...
^^
Line 2, column 331, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ilt into the all major cities and it is a American company. On the other, I bel...
^
Line 3, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...it is a American company. On the other, I believe all people should avoid eating...
^^
Line 3, column 473, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'can' requires base form of the verb: 'do'
Suggestion: do
...heee and oil. Many times people can not doing any complain towards company due to no...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 499, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eople can not doing any complain towards company due to no one office in our area...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, secondly, so, for example, such as, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1146.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.584 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33546569232 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 373.5 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.668450637 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.4 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.86666666667 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.470946706209 0.244688304435 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159979922383 0.084324248473 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119555418375 0.0667982634062 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251702014964 0.151304729494 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.149262069768 0.056905535591 262% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.0946893788 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.