The given line charts show the comparison of the rice export’s price per month between Thailand and Vietnam from 2012 to 2015.
Overall, the price of rice export from Thailand was relatively higher than that of Vietnam during the survey. It’s also noted that rice export’s price was not steady throughout the years.
Regarding the price of rice export from Thailand, in the first 2 months in 2012, the price remained steadily at over 500 million dollars before dropping by 50 to 450 million dollars in May. However, a relative growth was recorded in the price from May to July at 550 million dollars, reached its highest position and maintained until 2013. In 2013, the price experienced a noticeable decline to ranke its lowest position in the chart before increasing relatively in 2014 to reach nearly 500 million dollars. Although the price had a fluctuation in 2015, in the end it still remained at 500 million dollars.
In terms of the rice export’s price from Vietnam, in 2012 the price maintained at 400 million dollars in the first 2 month before dropping to 375 million dollars in May. However, from May to December, the price recovered relatively to 400 million dollars. In 2013 and 2014, the price witnessed a gradual decrease by 50 to 325 million dollars. In addition, from March to June in 2015, the price had a surge to reach 375 million dollars and maintained its price before experiencing a considerable decline to 325 million dollars again in December.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 118, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'months'.
Suggestion: months
...d at 400 million dollars in the first 2 month before dropping to 375 million dollars ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, may, regarding, so, still, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 33.7804878049 169% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1238.0 965.302439024 128% => OK
No of words: 251.0 196.424390244 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93227091633 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56793847801 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.442231075697 0.547539520022 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 349.2 283.868780488 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 3.36585365854 297% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2749755023 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.545454545 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8181818182 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45454545455 5.23603664747 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.548272658478 0.215688989381 254% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.256442601842 0.103423049105 248% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.163635195893 0.0843802449381 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.405280638745 0.15604864568 260% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.092575493978 0.0819641961636 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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