more and more people now own cars. What are the problems associated with an increase in the usage of private cars? How these problems can be solved?
Indeed, the proportion of people owning cars increase dramatically. Several problems have resulted from this upward trend and they should be attached by some effective solutions from the governments
There are few primary reasons why this phenomenon is one of the top concerns nowadays. First of all, our world is changing with better technologies than before and society is also developing which demand easier and more convenient tools for people's life. Thus cars are invented to help people go faster and reduce lots of time on movement, this becomes the most important reason why people are buying cars more and more. Moreover, nowadays, many car companies are producing a huge amount of cars which have affordable prices for people so they can get them easily. For example, in China, much Chinese middle class can buy a variety of cars at cheap prices.
Fortunately, several measures could be prevented from this issue by governments. Firstly, governments need to encourage people to use public transports such as buses, subways, instead of using cars as the main transportation. In addition, governments can reduce the number of cars by increasing the tax on car ownership. For example, in Vietnam, governments put 100% taxes on people's private cars.
In conclusion, the number of cars is rising rapidly in the last three decades. As a result, this problem has many negative effects. Therefore, governments should have plans to prevent this tendency.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1228.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 235.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22553191489 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7453108299 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646808510638 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0172050461 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4615384615 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0769230769 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1538461538 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304243639354 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105285940733 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710535109621 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16806874857 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509843216011 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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