more and more people now own cars What are the problems associated with an increase in the usage of private cars How these problems can be solved

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more and more people now own cars. What are the problems associated with an increase in the usage of private cars? How these problems can be solved?

It is true that the proportion of people owning cars increase dramatically. There are several problems that have resulted from this upward trend and they should be attached by some effective solutions from the governments
There are few primary reasons why this phenomenon is one of the top concerns nowadays. First of all, our world is changing with better technologies than before and society is also developing which demand easier and more convenient tools for people's life. Thus cars are invented to help people go faster and reduce lots of time on movement, this becomes the most important reason why people are buying cars more and more. Moreover, nowadays, many car companies are producing a huge amount of cars which have affordable prices for people so they can get them easily. For example, in China, much Chinese middle class can buy a variety of cars at cheap prices.
Fortunately, there are several measures that could be prevented this issue by governments. Firstly, governments need to encourage people to use public transports such as buses, subways, . . . instead of using cars as the main transportation. In addition, governments can reduce the number of cars by increasing the tax on car ownership. For example, in Vietnam, governments put 100% taxes on people's private cars.
In conclusion, the number of cars is rising rapidly in the last three decades. As a result, this problem has many negative effects. Therefore, governments should have plans to prevent this tendency.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all, it is true

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1256.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16872427984 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74303208117 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637860082305 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.7693865656 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7142857143 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3571428571 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2857142857 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306458692529 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101562711354 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0706764932727 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168459625886 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510153635643 0.056905535591 90% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 222, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...effective solutions from the governments There are few primary reasons why this p...
^^^
Line 2, column 256, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...more convenient tools for peoples life. Thus cars are invented to help people go fas...
^^^^
Line 3, column 185, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ublic transports such as buses, subways, . . . instead of using cars as the main t...
^^
Line 3, column 188, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ic transports such as buses, subways, . . . instead of using cars as the main tra...
^
Line 3, column 190, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... transports such as buses, subways, . . . instead of using cars as the main trans...
^
Line 3, column 192, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Instead
...ransports such as buses, subways, . . . instead of using cars as the main transportatio...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all, it is true

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1256.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16872427984 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74303208117 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637860082305 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.7693865656 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7142857143 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3571428571 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2857142857 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306458692529 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101562711354 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0706764932727 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168459625886 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510153635643 0.056905535591 90% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.