Because of the busy pace of modern life, many children spend most of their time indoors and have little exposure to the natural world. Discuss the effects lack of experience with and understanding of nature can have on children as they grow up.
Although many studies claim that spending tine among nature is a good choice, a lot of people prefer doing indoor activities, especially children, who spend most of their time watching TV and doing internet’s researches. Nowadays, this situation is developing in all the world and it could have bad effects on the younger generation.
First of all, children, who do not spend time among nature, may lose their natural curiosity, which is the main feature of a child. For instance, a child, who uses computer during his or her leisure time, does not use imagination or creativity to discover and l...
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Don't use this structure a
Don't use this structure a lot, like:
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a child, who uses computer during his or her leisure time, does not
whereas a person, who enjoys spending time among nature, improves
and the people, who decide to join those groups, have
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