In contemporary times due to the advancement and the availability of different modern electronic devices, the working pattern of the industrial sector has changed. People are now used to working remotely instead of going to the office by traveling in public or private transport for a long time. This change has pros and cons and in the following paragraphs, benefits, and drawbacks will be discussed.
On the one hand, firstly, the flexibility of time, work from the home gives the opportunity to manage the working hours which is very helpful for increasing the productivity of work. Secondly, when people work remotely the number of vehicles on the road decreases a lot. Therefore, the amount of burning fuel and chemical particles fall down in the air as a result less environmental pollution occurs. For example, due to the pandemic situation in 2020, in almost every country the employees had to work from home as a consequence fewer vehicles were running on the road. According to BBC news, the rate of water pollution in Italy and the air pollution in China had decreased significantly. Moreover, many sea creatures which are rare to see on the seashore because of pollution were seen at that time. In addition, the home office is useful to reduce stress and to build up a strong bonding among the family members.
On the other hand, scheduled maintenance is so hard when people work from home, therefore the efficiency of the employees degrades. Then, most of the companies face trouble measuring the performance of the workers. Moreover, it increases the technical cost and the difficulty to solve an issue. Furthermore, as reported by the sociologist, in the recent time because of the home office the communication skill among the workers has changed which is considered negatively.
In conclusion, to sum up, all the points, home office brings both comfort and comfortless. But the government and the organization should work to combine all the facilities to create a working place which is friendly for the employees.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 24.0651302605 12% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1707.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08035714286 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90959876131 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568452380952 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.6577302296 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.6875 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5625 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238038724298 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0702422462151 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632358928894 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13856856374 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0224925912083 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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