Fast food is becoming one part of life everywhere; this has bad effects on our lifestyle and diet. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
During few years, the number of fast food is increasing day to day as well as it is a negative on the health of masses and lifestyle to. Whereas, some people think it is good for health. I will explore the pros and cons of fast food and try to draw some conclusion.
To begin with, there are plethora of side effects of fast food on masses lifestyle and diet. The main point is obesity and some health problems. For instance, in 2015, indian authorities conducted a survey on fast food and the maximum number of individuals were suffering from obesity. It also increase their cholesterol level. Some people have bad habit to eating fast food and they face some health problems and it shows bad impact on their lifestyle to. If individuals daily eat fast food then their liver could damage because these food are oily and unhygienic. Some shops are established on roads and the dirt of roads is pat on the food when vehicles cross.
On the flip side, there are some positive impacts of fast food. Junk food is also part of fast food and most of bodybuilders and weightlifters promote junk food in their diet. Because it is too good for their health. Moreover, it is cheapest and easily available in the street of every town.
To conclude, although there are numerous bad impacts of fast food on individuals health and I agree with this notion. Yet, it is the cheapest and easy available source of food.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 67, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'masses'' or 'mass's'?
Suggestion: masses'; mass's
...lethora of side effects of fast food on masses lifestyle and diet. The main point is o...
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Line 2, column 168, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... health problems. For instance, in 2015, indian authorities conducted a survey on...
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Line 2, column 296, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'increases'?
Suggestion: increases
...ls were suffering from obesity. It also increase their cholesterol level. Some people ha...
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Line 2, column 532, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this food' or 'these foods'?
Suggestion: this food; these foods
...d then their liver could damage because these food are oily and unhygienic. Some shops are...
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Line 3, column 105, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the bodybuilders') or simply say ''most bodybuilders''.
Suggestion: most of the bodybuilders; most bodybuilders
...Junk food is also part of fast food and most of bodybuilders and weightlifters promote junk food in ...
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Line 4, column 70, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...re numerous bad impacts of fast food on individuals health and I agree with this notion. Ye...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, then, well, whereas, for instance, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1153.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5753968254 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40891973836 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 176.041082164 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496031746032 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 355.5 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.3241654059 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.0625 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.75 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2246419235 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0780503270491 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725661013467 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153681674196 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033817050323 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 13.0946893788 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.