Some considerate individuals are of the viewpoint that growth in factories is significant in today’s world as it provides pathway for various job opportunities. The opponents suggest that development in industrial sector should be forbidden as factories releases toxic gases and is deteriorating quality of air. This essay tends to shed light on both the viewpoints.
To commence with, many people believe that industrialisation is vital to curb unemployment as factories appoint workers on large scale. A notable rise in growth of industries have been proved as a boon to thousands of people as they working in industries to earn their livelihood. Moreover, many people in India illiterate so to earn money and fulfill their basic needs they work day and night. For instance- In 2007, Reliance company hired 1 lakh employees in Reliance petroleum industries. Industries have been proved beneficial in terms of employment as it helps people to earn money.
The opponents are of the view that industrial growth is the major factor responsible for degradation of environment and regime should take necessary actions against it. As many factories release harmful, toxic gases that deteriorate quality of air, water also gets contaminated by pollutants released by industries that leads to surge in various diseases. This has made people vulnerable to many health disorders like asthma, bronchitis, heart failures, lung infections taht have ultimately proved fatal. For instance- Air quality index has decreased to a considerable rate in last years because of the increase of industrialisation. In order to address this issue, government ought to provide strict guidelines about waste recycle and impose harsh penalties to the industries which lead to degradation of environment.
In conclusion, having discussed both the viewpoints in detail, I am inclined to believe that industries plays a pivotal part in country’s economy and employment sector also. However, regime should introduce rules and regulations for industries and provide effective methods for waste disposal. Moreover, industries not following government rules should be penalised.
- Large businesses have big budgets for marketing and promotion and as a result people gravitate towards buying their products What problems does this cause What could be done to encourage people to buy local products 84
- Some people say that industrial growth is necessary to solve poverty but some other people argue that industrial growth is creating environmental problems and it should be stopped Discuss both views and give your opinion 84
- Large businesses have big budgets for marketing and promotion and as a result people gravitate towards buying their products What problems does this cause What could be done to encourage people to buy local products 84
- An increasing number of developing countries are expanding their tourist industry Why do you think it is the case And do you think it I a positive trend 44
- Large businesses have big budgets for marketing and promotion and as a result people gravitate towards buying their products What problems does this cause What could be done to encourage people to buy local products 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 169, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...country’s economy and employment sector also. However, regime should introduce rules...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, for instance, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1830.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.59633027523 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12560069136 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587155963303 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 565.2 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1403145471 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.375 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4375 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3125 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252581484193 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0785947557452 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055464006245 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147883800585 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00728693607374 0.056905535591 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.2 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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