Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a
company or organization.
An exorbitant amount of people nowadays opt for self-employment rather than working in an organization. While, some other people might work in a company and embellish the educational knowledge level. In my opinion, self-employment might open a door for number of modern opportunities and escalate the level of economy.
It is evident that number of people decide to be self-employed instead of limiting the boundaries under any company. For instance, it is depicted that the rise of startups founded by young engineers has surged predominantly over the past few years. Moreover, startups gives chance for various other inventions such as food delivery apps, that are created by the youngsters. Likewise, self-employed jobs set unique rules for the office and flexibility in the work time. Thus, malleability in the office hours may give rise to the prolific innovations and creativity levels.
On the other hand, people whose daily earnings provide basic essentials for the whole family may not take the risk to lose the job. For example, it is reported that the mental health problems are increased after the deployment. Hence, eliminating the thought of the renouncing from the job some people try to update their knowledge in the existing fields. Since, it is believed that it might increase the salary and ultimately, the standard of living. Although risking job may double the level of opportunities, people may think of not quitting for the survival of the dependencies.
Thus, ingenious people nowadays decide to be self-employed to be more productive and efficient. In my belief, it is crucial to think twice before taking any steps owing to the fact that, it might surge various economical and mental health problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, likewise, may, moreover, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1458.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24460431655 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96303328956 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579136690647 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 17.6123693907 49.4020404114 36% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.2 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5333333333 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.06666666667 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346475093351 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109680745523 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11044587657 0.0667982634062 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206993900996 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0996202005799 0.056905535591 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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