Some people decide to start their ơn business instead of working for a company or organization. Do the advantages for people working for their own business outweigh the disadvantages.
In current days a large number of people decide to start their own business instead of working for a company or organization. Although there are some benefits and drawbacks for this topic but in my opinion, the advantages for people working for their own business outweigh the disadvantages.
One of the advantages of starting a new business is it can involve financial risks and the level of competition is very tight.There are many things you have to do like careful market research, understanding customers needs and predicting future trends. If you don’t be careful and you do not experienced enough, the possibility of failure and setback will very high. You need to control you money, you can easily lost all of your money so it will be better if you practice and have more experience from working for a company.
However, starting and running your own business will provide you more opportunities. You can yurn your creative ideas into reality, show everyone what you want to do, take it closer with people. When you start, it can have some problems, challenges but after that, yuou can improve your skill, expand your knowledge.
Furthermore, starting your own business give you more benefits, you have the free dom to make your decision. Being an employee, you must do thing the company want, you are bound by the restrictions and limitations. As a result, you are more independent and automatic when having your own business. There are more opportunities to be successful.
In conclusion, i think owning a business, has many benefits, advantages. Tehse include becoming free, be successful, provide you more opportunity in your life. However, there are still a really high possibility of failure so just learn from mistakes and believe yourself.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 17, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
In current days a large number of people decide to start their own busine...
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Line 3, column 127, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: There
... the level of competition is very tight.There are many things you have to do like car...
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Line 3, column 414, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'lose'
Suggestion: lose
...ed to control you money, you can easily lost all of your money so it will be better ...
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Line 9, column 16, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ies to be successful. In conclusion, i think owning a business, has many benef...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, really, so, still, i think, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1481.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08934707904 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84766744164 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570446735395 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8635845359 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.7333333333 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266853196092 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110441813627 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.178437783321 0.0667982634062 267% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194463016305 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.261970513456 0.056905535591 460% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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