Q ) Many people work long hours , leaving very little time for leisure activities .
Does this situation have more advantages or more disadvantages ?
A large number of people devote more time to work and are left with extremely less time to involve themselves in hobbies and leisure activities . In my opinion , working long hours can bring about problems for the health and social life of an individual compared to any advantages that it might bring .
Admittedly , there are some basic benefits of working all the time of the day.
,Firstly , it can lead to success in professional life and can enhance the chances of promotion .This enables more income at their disposal and might lead to a better standard of living in the society . Secondly , As parents are role models for their children ,sometimes children can learn important life skills like hardwork and dedication from their parents.
Nevertheless , the advantages stated above , I believe that people could suffer serious drawbacks from working most of the time in the day . one potential problem is that their health is bound to suffer to a great extent . At present , people are undergoing mental health problems like depression and anxiety owing to undue stress taken at work and not giving themselves a chance to unwind during leisure time . Also people who have a sitting job have developed problems like cervical , back pain , obesity and eyesight
Another obvious issue of not engaging in a hobby is that their social life gets disrupted . In other words , people are deprived of the opportunity to reconnect with their friends or meet new people during leisure time . As a result , an individual’s interpersonal and emotional skills fail to develop . For example : with the advent of technology , people stay connected at home, prioritizing work even during family vacations and get isolated from their immediate surroundings.
In conclusion , while there are plus points to having paying attention to work most of the time , too much would be suffered . Engaging in leisure activities is must for de-stressing oneself and maintaining social relations .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, in other words, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1652.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21135646688 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7547641979 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574132492114 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0245919258 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.0 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6428571429 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2857142857 7.06120827912 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 45.0 5.01903807615 897% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266623609559 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0882873674672 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614044174607 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135679566848 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0721854272344 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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