As compared to the past, children these days spend more of their leisure time indoors with computers and TV and less time outdoors. Describe some of the problems this lack of outdoor leisure time can cause and suggest at least one possible solution.
Although outdoor activities are recommended by everyone, many young people, especially children, prefer staying at home, doing indoor activities, like spending time watching TV or doing internet researches. This situation can cause many troubles to both mental and physical health.
First of all, my opinion is that doing outdoor activities helps for all intents and purposes health of our body. With outdoor activities, I do not mean only sports, but also other activities such as going shopping, walking, hanging out with friends, and all this things, therefore, would help our body’s mus...
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paragraph 1: introduction -- explain in your own words about the issue and give a thesis statement at the end. Give a reasonable not a dogmatic statement.
paragraph 2: reason 1 + why reason 1(arguments here) + example + a small conclusion for this paragraph.
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