It is true that, in this contemporary era, situations are being got the worst day by day at an unprecedented rate in all over the world. However, number of masses introspect that it is a good to accept a critical conditions like, less money or unsatisfactory job. Whereas, others contemplate that it is superior way to endeavour and ameliorate such situations and I am totally agreed with this Statement.
To commence with, we should keep focusing on our goals whatever we want to do in our life. For example, christiano Ronaldo was born in poor family and he was not able to eat proper food. Nevertheless, he used to do job as a sweeper for money but right now he is a wealthy person because of his hardwork and dedication. Last but not least, good job should be found by people for improving their standard. Moreover, people would have to acquire new skills for achieving something great in their life.
Looking at the other view, there are overabundance of situation that should be accepted by us. First and foremost, inflation rate and unemployment rate are being increased nowadays. Furthermore, finding new job is also not an easy task. Additionally, people are having to do unsatisfactory job because if they leave their job so they would have to confront some problems until they get new job like, bills, grocery item in their home. Another reason could be, there are some conditions like, untimely death and serious illness which cannot be stopped by us so it is better to accept this conditions. To exemplify, according to a survey, it can be manifested that more than 52% people in India are facing problem due to lack of employment and inflation.
On a concluding note, undoubtedly there are plenty of situations which may be accepted by sizeable majority of individuals yet, we must understand that we should always give our 100% and show our curiosity towards to achieve something new or doing our situations better.
- Nowadays families are not as close as in the past and a lot of people have become used to this Explain the reasons for this and discuss any possible effects it may have on society 84
- Nowadays many people have access to computers on a wide basis and a large number of children play computer games what are the negative impacts of playing computer games and what can be done to minimize the bad effects 78
- Some people think that hard work helps in achieving Financial success while others think it is not the only thing which contributes to financial success Discuss both the views and give your opinion 56
- Many people argue that eating junk food has led to an unhealthy lifestyle This problem has become more common among young people these days Do you agree or disagree that junk food is the cause of the issue 84
- Some people think that to lead a successful life a university degree is important Others believe that this is no longer true nowadays Discuss both views and give your own opinion 67
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, look, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, whereas, for example, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 7.0 329% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 1.00243902439 1097% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 37.0 5.60731707317 660% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1609.0 965.302439024 167% => OK
No of words: 331.0 196.424390244 169% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86102719033 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 3.73543355544 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83047552825 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 106.607317073 185% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595166163142 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 283.868780488 178% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3040682505 43.030603864 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.266666667 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0666666667 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 5.23603664747 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.13902439024 527% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204449851479 0.215688989381 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0647445091974 0.103423049105 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491031234543 0.0843802449381 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120903445379 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457861136837 0.0819641961636 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 40.7170731707 174% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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