Government funding for pure science endeavors, such as space exploration, should be reduced in order to
direct more funding towards humanitarian science projects.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In
developing and supporting your position, be sure to consider specific instances for which this statement
may or may not be true.
Any scientific exploration can definitely be considered as a remarkable effort in the understanding the abstruse aspects of the universe and is a big step in the field of science and technology. Therefore it is the government's duty to support such incredible scientists to lead to successful space endeavors. It is also true that such scientific exploration require profuse amount of financial support for the government. However such huge amount of funding spent on space exploration cannot put other significant aspects such as the basic human needs or rights on stake. Therefore I fundamentally agree with the author's claim that funding for humanitarian science projects should be increased.My viewpoints are aptly illustrated through the below mentioned examples.
Humanitarian projects, which help satisfy the needs of destitute people and which are oriented towards protection of human rights, is what should preempt all other responsiblities of the government.It would be considered foolhardy to provide more funding on space exploration projects while on the other hand let the entire nation is drown under the hardships of poverty or any kind of epidemic.People of the nation have voted for the governement because they believe that the govenrment would help them in their times of need and protect thier basic rights.For example,consider countries where economy is consistently low and people do not have basic amenities such as food,clothing and there is a massive rate of unemployement.Such a scenario needs to be to be handled and managed first by the government by financially supporting the people.Or maybe the governement could conduct surveys and devise efficient strategies that could help curb unemployement in such countries.In this scenario it would be prudent for the government to reduce the funding spent on less important matters like space exploration and dedicate their efforts into solving major problems that have a negative impact on the citizen's lives. Humanitairian scientist do equally commendable jobs as the other scientist who lead space explorations and hence the government should equally commit to help these scientists and provide more financial support to them as well.
However ,in contrast to the above statement, the government should not completely undermine the efforts of scientists who lead space explorations.If they provide them with much lesser funding then what is actually required then they scientist might not be able to acheive their goals and less support from the government could be an impediment in their scientific explorations. To build spaceships, requires a huge amount of money as even the simplest and the most intricate machinery inside the spaceships cost many dollars and it would be necessary for the scientists to build a high quality
machinery which would bolster the reliability of the spaceship and the safety of the astronauts.Hence if the government does not support them well enough then then they might get disheartened and their efforts would be undermined.
To sum up, although the government needs to financially help the scientists for their remarkable journey towards space explorations, but to establish peaceful conditions among the general population and help satisfy their needs should and always be the initial priority of the government in comparison to all other matters. This helps in improving the nation's general state of happiness and prosperity and support the people in times of their needs
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, hence, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, well, while, for example, in contrast, in general, kind of, such as, in contrast to, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 12.9106741573 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2855.0 2235.4752809 128% => OK
No of words: 522.0 442.535393258 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.469348659 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77988695657 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11052419298 2.79657885939 111% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 215.323595506 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.484674329502 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 868.5 704.065955056 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 65.0 23.0359550562 282% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 657.937259547 60.3974514979 1089% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 356.875 118.986275619 300% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 65.25 23.4991977007 278% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 23.375 5.21951772744 448% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 7.80617977528 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270418863934 0.243740707755 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115319086274 0.0831039109588 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0775112461372 0.0758088955206 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144624411673 0.150359130593 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0829014090261 0.0667264976115 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 37.0 14.1392134831 262% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -2.96 48.8420337079 -6% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.92365168539 216% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.8 12.1743820225 245% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.33 12.1639044944 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.76 8.38706741573 128% => OK
difficult_words: 129.0 100.480337079 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 28.0 11.2143820225 250% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 11.7820224719 255% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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