It is true that, in this contemporary era, animals and plants are being died nowadays at an unprecedented rate in all over the world. Moreover, number of individuals contemplate that this is the main cause of environmental problems. While, other group of masses introspect that there are more significant environmental problems and I am also totally agreed with this statement.
To commence with, factories are being escalated day by day which are creating pollutions like, air, noise and water. Due to air pollution our ozone layer is in danger not only this but human beings and whole flora and fauna. Furthermore, people are having to confront problems like, cancer, heart diseases and so on. Secondly, new roads and buildings are being constructed these days by cutting infinite trees that is why global warming is rising year by year. To exemplify, according to a survey, it can be manifested that more than 65% factories are producing different type of pollution which are also the causes of environmental problems.
On the other hand, although plants and animals play an indispensable role in our food chain, scientists prefer to use animals for checking different type of gadgets on them. Additionally, deforestation is common that is why people are having to suffer for getting oxygen these days. For example, in this covid pandemic era, scientists are trying to make new vaccines for people but first vaccines are being used on animals for checking that there is any allergy or hazard sign or not. In addition, individuals are having to purchase man-made oxygen because of lack of oxygen in our atmosphere.
On a concluding note, undoubtedly, losing our flora and fauna are the cause of environmental problems yet, we must understand that there are overabundance reasons available. Eventually, I personally believe that people should focus for saving our environment.
- Nowadays many people choose to be self employed rather than to work for a company or organization Why might this be the case What could be the disadvantages of being self employed 73
- In many Countries the amount of crime is increasing What do you think are the main causes of Crime How can we deal with those causes 78
- In many countries traditional food is being replaced by international fast food This has negative effects on both families and societies To what extend do you agree or disagree 56
- Some people say that all mobile cell phone conversations should be banned in public and crowded places Others disagree Discuss both sides and give your own opinion 75
- Some universities now offer their courses on the Internet so that people can study online Is this a positive or negative development 84
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in addition, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 13.1623246493 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1583.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20723684211 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91008007608 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582236842105 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7140714279 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.071428571 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7142857143 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.21428571429 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194019271184 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677258590633 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450649932905 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123551117146 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415050914044 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.