As, consuming meat can result in problems related to health thereby everybody should take a vegetarian diet into consideration. I completely disagree with this statement due to the fact health problems are not only caused by diet on the contrary also by bad lifestyle. Moreover, it is impossible to make every person on earth to become vegetarian due to various factors.
Arguably, if only diet was responsible for health issues, all the vegans would be living a perfect life. More than food individuals way of living is important which include various factors like how often he does exercise? what is his financial condition and a number of more aspects. For quintessence, a person living in poverty will be more prone to diseases not because he is vegetarian or not but due to the condition in which he is living.
Additionally, it is not practical for every individual to entirely switch on to fruitarian diet. Since our planet is a diverse place and there are various weather conditions available so eating habits also differs from place to place according to the need. For instance, in countries like Greenland and Canada where weather remains mostly cold and temperatures sometime drops to freezing point, including meat in diet will help in keeping a person warm in these harsh conditions.
To conclude, only meat consumption does not lead to heath problems there are other factors such as lifestyle of a human being which results in this issue. Also, it is not possible to make veg diet obligatory in every part of the world considering the fact that weather conditions would be unique in different places.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As, consuming meat can result in problems ...
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Line 3, column 223, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: What
...actors like how often he does exercise? what is his financial condition and a number...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, for instance, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1353.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9926199262 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76327841065 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590405904059 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0922547244 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.75 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5833333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58333333333 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194159263576 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687572678853 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0756950561511 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117630417704 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0963462156187 0.056905535591 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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