The benefits of shopping
Shopping may be bad for your wallet; however, it has the majority of benefits. In this essay, I am going to explore the advantages of this matter.
In terms of mental health, the first advantage is that shopping may be known as a kind of amusement, which can help a person relieve pressure. The fact has shown that when you do the shopping with your friends who have excellent fashion sense, you can purchase the best items, the things you like. Also, you will be satisfied and build up your feelings of self-worth if you find a great bargain. Additionally, it is also possible to say that the second advantage is that shopping helps people form healthy relationships. To demonstrate this idea, consider how grandparents may bond with their grandchildren by purchasing new toys or junk food for them. Shopping allows them to spend more time with their family, make them happier since they feel more connected to their family.
In terms of physical health, first and foremost, shopping also advocates people to shop because it prevents them from sitting, which can also be very bad for the heart. Some studies have shown that walking while carrying shopping bags burns 385 calories. Women will walk more than an average of four miles for weekly shopping, which usually lasts around one hour per day. Window- shopping is an example of this issue.
In conclusion, there are several benefits of shopping. It is advisable that you should do the shopping when you’re under pressure.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, second, so, while, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1232.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88888888889 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51886307723 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626984126984 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 358.2 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7184544604 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269360667985 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0942771467159 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693659694175 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167781561351 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634520509568 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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