TPO31- independent Writing:
Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past.
In this rapidly changing world, technology play essential role in human lives. technology provides solution of every problem such as expanding trades among countries, communication,luxury life. I strongly believe that people today feel more easy and happy life rather than past. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, In this digital world it is easy to use anything what you want. pupil can easily travel from one corner to another corner of the world with less expected time than past. my own experince is the evidence of this. two years ago, my family made a foreign tour for fifteen days. we did a lot of fun and learn about western culture by visiting there. The of foreign country were so humble and helping . it was possible due to only good transportation system.
Moreover, a humankind, in current era have more option of source of entertainments. it almost become a trend everyone on weekend celebrate their holidays effectively like using heavy bass music tape and dancing with friends, attending parties, which helps to reduce office work load. To exemplify, my boss offer a treat after getting heavy benefit due to our hard work and skills. All the members of office had a great fun.As a result of fast internet speed we can make video call and connect easily with friends and family from any location of the earth .
In addition, as technology improves day by day provide us more comfort life than past. Anyone can easily imagine how we updated our living style. my grandfather used to live in a wooden house with less facilities and some time had suffered in bad weather. However, My parents are living in fully furnished home. Now they can control everything with a single remote and almost in every where there are sensor device, which makes our lifestyle so comfort and enjoyable and less time wasting.
In conclusion, I tend to say that pupil nowadays had more happy and satisfied life than past due to effective transportation and trading system and numerous no. of entertaining resources.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Technology
...ogy play essential role in human lives. technology provides solution of every problem such...
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Suggestion: , luxury
...ng trades among countries, communication,luxury life. I strongly believe that people to...
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Suggestion:
... begin with, In this digital world it is easy to use anything what you want. pupi...
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Suggestion: Pupil
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Suggestion: We
...y made a foreign tour for fifteen days. we did a lot of fun and learn about wester...
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...t western culture by visiting there. The of foreign country were so humble and he...
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...reign country were so humble and helping . it was possible due to only good transp...
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...gn country were so humble and helping . it was possible due to only good transport...
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...ore option of source of entertainments. it almost become a trend everyone on weeke...
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...l the members of office had a great fun.As a result of fast internet speed we can ...
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...nd family from any location of the earth . In addition, as technology improve...
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...magine how we updated our living style. my grandfather used to live in a wooden ho...
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun facilities is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...her used to live in a wooden house with less facilities and some time had suffered i...
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Message: Did you mean 'everywhere'?
Suggestion: everywhere
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'devices'?
Suggestion: devices
... almost in every where there are sensor device, which makes our lifestyle so comfort a...
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...rt and enjoyable and less time wasting. In conclusion, I tend to say that pupil...
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.... In conclusion, I tend to say that pupil nowadays had more happy and satisf...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1727.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 352.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90625 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62849881734 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642045454545 0.524837075471 122% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.6541300079 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.5 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45454545455 5.45110844103 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.5376344086 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223308283495 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0499141988886 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0552277310693 0.0737576698707 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108083330396 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0434626175917 0.0645574589148 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.