Modern technology has made it easier for individuals to download copyrighted music and books from the internet for no charge.
To what extent is this a positive or a negative development?
Technologicalising information is the current trend in today's world. As a result, technology evolution makes people more accessible to download official music and books from the internet without payment. Every development has both sides and in my perspective, although drawbacks are unavoidable, benefits associated with this trend which make it a positive evolution of digitalized books and music outweigh those negative points.
On the one hand, there is an obvious reason explaining why people support that free digital copyrighted books and music are negative. One of the main disadvantages is that age verifications are not compulsorily require so that people crossing from elder to teenagers and kids can easily access to certain types of information. The case will be more serious if children and teenagers accidentally read a pornographic book since it is proved by specialists that these categories can seriously damage children mental health. To make sure this can be curbed, national authorities should establish adequate legislation and strengthen age proof.
On the other hand, free downloading music and books brings numerous benefits which are more significantly obvious than drawbacks to citizens from different cultures and age groups. To begin, this trend can give people a wide range of information they have not encountered before. Thus, they will be significantly well informed of the current trend as well as developing moral standard to easily adapt to various culture sharing and international integration. Moreover, enjoying the melodies or relaxing while reading books are far more convenient, even though people are doing household chores or cooking. The reason for this is that digital book or music only require a computer or mobile phone whether they are connected to the wireless network or not.
In conclusion, in majority of aspects, technologicalising certain types of entertainment such as books and music are positive. However, there are little drawbacks associated with this. trend. In order to be more benefited from it, national authorities should carry out enough rules and regulations. Alongside, citizens should consider carefully before downloading free books and music.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 185, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Trend
... little drawbacks associated with this. trend. In order to be more benefited from it,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, then, thus, well, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1890.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.60830860534 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07714990457 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575667655786 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 597.6 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4616777571 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.125 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0625 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21251600804 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067860963711 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055651066635 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13359776637 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485442875424 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.