In many countries more and more young people are becoming jobless What problems do you think unemployment will cause to individuals and the society What measures should be taken to reduce the level of unemployment among youngsters

Thesedays, youngsters have to face lot of problems for getting success in their lives and it can be seen that the issue of joblessness is being faced by youth after passing out schools or colleges. This trend has bad impacts for both society and masses. This essay will discuss some steps, which should be taken to mitigate this issue.

To begin with, unemployment has become burning question of the day and it puts adverse effects on humans as well as community. First of all , being unemployed can lead to health hazards such as depression, anxiety and other brain issues because juveniles want to get good jobs for catering their needs but they cannot find. A news article reported that about 2 lakhs youngsters are reeling under the depression by dint of unemployment. Secondly, joblessness is likely to have higher rate of anti social activities likewise, murders, robberies etectra. As, in the lust of money, heinous crimes are perpetrated by young age. .

Furthermore, some measures could be taken by bureaucracy to solve the problem of youth unemployment. First and foremost, government should increase job opportunities in different genres like as, education, industries and so on. Along with this, employees must be hired, according to their education because some are less educated and are doing higher paid jobs. Last but not the least, self -employment should be encouraged among young people by providing loans. For example, some nations have provided financial aid to youth for opening their own businesses. As a result, these countries have the least rate of joblessness.

To sum up , although society and individuals face myriad problems as of unemployment, this issue cannot be solved unless government takes any relevant step towards it.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, likewise, second, secondly, so, well, for example, such as, as a result, as well as, first of all, to begin with, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1479.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20774647887 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76641887012 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.679577464789 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2330044712 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9333333333 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1333333333 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179453896183 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0555002802677 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411912991564 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101585128336 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.018288899519 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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In today's world unemployment have become the major issue in all natoins. Although, In most of the countries majority of youngsters are becoming jobless. This essay will not only highlights the problems caused by unemployment to the youth but also sone potential measures to migiate it.

There are some problems which can be face by youngsters when they have no job. However, when the youth is having nothing to do for earning money they feel unrestful and they also become irritated easily with no reason. Moreover, it leads them to the criminals where they comitt crimes such as snatching and roberry to fulfill their hungerbof money which results in get back to the ropes of prison. Some of the youngsters get addicted to alchohals after receiving clean refusal from the job. It have some negative effects on their health also. Eventually, after getting addiction of alchohal, most of the youngsters get captured by some serious health issues, such as adverse effect of alchohal on their lungs and on other body parts.

There are some important measures to control the continuous increasing rate of the unemployment. However, retirement age should be limited in some aspects to give opportunitiesopportunities to the youth to get well paid jobs in eficient time in order to raise their financial statuses. The another excellent and very helpful solution is to develop the local industrialization including small and medium industries, especially in rural areas to well educated youngsters as well as to those who are not educated. Indirectly, it also helps in raising economical status of the country.

To summarise, government of all the nations should provide prominent opportunities to maintain the employment rate so country can be grow fastly in every aspect such as economy, science and technology.