In recent years, the family structure has changed, as well as the family roles. What are the changes that have occurred? Do you think these changes are positive or negative?
In modern society, there is not only a bulk of the variation in the structure of the family unit but also the family roles. From my perspective, I concur that these familial changes sometimes bring drawbacks.
There are two noteworthy alterations in the family structure and roles. One change is, more people prefer living in the nuclear family rather than the extended one. Owing to the fact that people are push for privacy and independence, the young generation chooses to live in a smaller family or to delay bearing and rearing children. One clear example is in Europe a plethora number of young couples decide not to live with their parents and refuse to have kids to focus on their career path. Another change is that more and more women decide to be single moms, in the light that women have more power and are able to meet the requirements of being family breadwinners, women resolve to live and raise children on their own.
All the above changes are both positive and adverse. On the one hand, those drastic changes have to drop numerous benefits. Initially, young people can get rid of family pressure, especially from their parents. Since they do not live in an extended family, they can step back into the family’s duties and responsibilities. In other words, in Vietnam young people that can decide their own life and follow their dream and hobbies as they do not live with their parents. On the other hand, there are also disadvantages, the most considerable one is the quantity future workforce will be on the wane owing to the fact that the young population rate is reduced. Furthermore, the distance between family members would be expanded while there would be less care and love for children and the elderly.
In conclusion, the changes in family structure and roles can be beneficial in some aspects on the contrary they can also take a toll on others.
- Some people think that a huge amount of time and money is spent on the protection of wild animals and that this money could be better spent on the human population To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 67
- Some people think that a huge amount of time and money is spent on the protection of wild animals and that this money could be better spent on the human population To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 74
- People in many countries are spending less time with their family What are the reasons and effects of this 82
- Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not local people Why is it the case What can be done to attract more local people to visit these places 77
- Nowadays more and more people decide to have children later in their life What are the reasons what are the effects on society and family life 71
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, while, in conclusion, in other words, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1561.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80307692308 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54209343913 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510769230769 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.024253132 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.066666667 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.93333333333 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267399188338 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106258040078 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705285539941 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196301433134 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473839987639 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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