Some people believe that international sporting events are the ideal opportunity to show the world the qualities of the hosting nation. Others believe that these events are mainly a large unjustifiable expense.
Several people believe that global sporting events play an important role to show the reputation of that nation while others think these events have wasted a huge amount of cash and time. In my opinion, I totally agree with the first idea, and this essay will give some information in many aspects to support this idea.
First of all, nations join the sports events, which creates a high bond between these nations closer. For example, Fifa is a famous football event in many European nations so they will compare each other in a national stadium, which makes the relationship from both sides greater and better. Moreover, these events are also good opportunities to show Traditional and cultural values and reveal their hospitability standards, this increases their reputation levels significantly. For ínstance, the Olympics is held in Tokyo, Japan where Professional Athletes shall show their beautiful dances that are unique to the National identity and reveal their hospitality standards. In addition, To held a national sports event, governments spend lots of money and designs building or upgrading the infrastructure of the playfield complex. These efforts reveal the organization's ability for sports competition events of this nation. During the competition, it shows their governance, technological skills, team management, and communication skills which can be very inspiring for the visitors. For instance, FIFA World Cup in Brazil spread the message of how good the nation is in building complex infrastructure that can accommodate hundreds and thousands of spectators.
In conclusion, sporting events provide a huge success for the nation that can show skills and standards. Viewers all over the world can be inspired by these qualities and can even exercise them in their homeland.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 855, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'organizations'' or 'organization's'?
Suggestion: organizations'; organization's
...field complex. These efforts reveal the organizations ability for sports competition events o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1519.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40569395018 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87889578339 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604982206406 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7013115009 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.583333333 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4166666667 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296306641429 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11268669757 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0791794755222 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204084822901 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308376776939 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.95 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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