In this day and age, a wide range of adolescents from remote locations are moving to the cities for their occupation or study. Although plenty of people argue the benefits of this situation outweigh the drawbacks, I still believe that this development does great harm to our life in many ways.
This phenomenon of youngsters leaving their rural villages and arrive in the cities is attributed to a host of reasons. For one, urban areas are the best option for well-rounded knowledge and soft skills due to their higher quality standard of education. Thus, this will enable the youth to compete for vacancies in big companies. On top of that, there are numerous universities for juveniles to choose from in terms of many fields such as banking, economy or technology. On account of that, teenagers would have more opportunities to find out what they are really passionate about which results in their mature enough to live independently with the vital social skills in life at hand.
Despite a few perks of this situation like the well-rounded knowledge or the various opportunities for the young to work or study more efficiently, there is no doubt that this phenomenon still has some weaknesses in resident’s lives. First and foremost, overpopulation in cities results from the massive figure for young citizens move to urban locations. Therefore, remote areas will be lack people whereas cities’ population still upswing dramatically day by day which leads to the unbalanced number of residents between the two areas. Furthermore, the more teens move to urban areas, the lack of quality youngsters resources in rural locations owing to talented adolescents are leaving remote villages and hometowns. Consequently, the locations far from the center of countries will not be able to improve their quality of living standards so that the gap between the two locations will be further widened.
To summarize, there are several causes with regard to this case including the large quantity of knowledge and chances for juveniles to improve themselves. In spite of a number of strengths, I reckon there are great negative impacts on these problems consisting of the unbalance of both population and talent human resources between the two types of areas (urban and rural locations).
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, really, so, still, therefore, thus, well, whereas, i reckon, no doubt, such as, in spite of, with regard to, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1919.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 371.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17250673854 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83283665113 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530997304582 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 601.2 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.3069073714 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.071428571 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8571428571 7.06120827912 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226740119011 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0766302556856 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474572655774 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134941811579 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489840576106 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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