Doing an enjoyable activity with a child can develop better skills and more creativity than reading. To what extent do you agree? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your answer.
Several people argue that children should spend more time playing engaging activities than reading to develop better skills and creativity. In my opinion, I totally approve of this idea and this essay shall explain why doing leisures activities is positive for children around the world.
First of all, creative activities such as Drawing will expand children's imagination because it improves creativity in many aspects significant. For example, many nations organize a drawing competition contest to find and raise children's talents. In addition, children can practice team sports to improve their social skills and understand to play like a group. For instance, when children play football together, they will develop analytical skills to assemble a team effectively to win the opponents Moreover, children at an early age still hard to focus on study and if parents force children to study or read books will create negative impacts on them which leads them to begin to fear it and reduce their imagination. If children just reading books or watching TV nearly all day, they will become a bookworm and do not have social skills.
In conclusion, I strongly recommend children take time playing activities to evolve experiences and creativity. On the other hand, we still need to encourage children to focus on study but still have spare time to do several sports to relieve stress. By that, I believe the young generation will healthier and smarter in no time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, so, still, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 13.1623246493 8% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1228.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18143459916 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6597343531 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637130801688 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.4881869829 49.4020404114 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.8 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.7 7.06120827912 208% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14708625722 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0616979491956 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527987303222 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111933436656 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0638479235882 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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