You cannot go to a company where you got an offer. Write a letter to the HR supervisor to
explain the reason why you decline the offer
express you gratitude
explain you like your current job very much
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to express my gratitude for the job offer I have been offered for the Media Manager position at your New York office. Although I was flattered and it is an honor for me to get this opportunity, unfortunately, I have to decline it.
I have to say that I was really impressed with the offer that I have received and I am grateful for the time you spend on checking my resume and portfolio. I have heard a lot of positive comments about your work environment and the professionalism among your employees. With that said, it was a really difficult decision and it took me a week to weigh in my option. Hence I have decided to continue my work with my current employer.
I have some in-progress projects that I want to finish before I can continue my career with another company. Although this is my main reason for not accepting your offer, I have to say that the offered salary is lower than my current income which I have to take it into consideration as well. Please accept my sincere apologies for all the time and effort you made and I hope we can be in contact for any feature opportunity.
Yours faithfully,
Ehsan Majd
- A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer He she has asked for your advice Write a letter to your friend In your letter explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday describe some possible 73
- Most of the people in society enjoy watching crime movies and criminal TV programs Why do you think people have more interest to watch them What is the impact on society due to this 67
- some people say that popular tourist destinations are receiving bad effects from travelers why does this happen and what can be done to resolve this 73
- Some people think that competitive sports have a positive effect on the child s education while others argue it is not so Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of competitive sports for children Some people think that competitive sports have a positive 78
- some people say that popular tourist destinations are receiving bad effects from travelers why does this happen and what can be done to resolve this 45
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 367, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...t took me a week to weigh in my option. Hence I have decided to continue my work with...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, really, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 32.9175257732 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 969.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48611111111 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7021137829 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574074074074 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 317.7 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.78138874 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.9 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6 16.8248392259 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.7 4.34317383033 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150223347113 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588673122826 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491121252627 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109591413674 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0199057260292 0.0580467560999 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.