Some organizations believe that their employees should dress smartly. Others value quality of work above appearance.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
There is no doubt that dress style has an important role for some companies these days and it is one of the factors affecting how work is judged. But some organizations prefer to improve the performance of their employees rather than focus on how they wear. In my opinion, it depends on the company's activity.
Some organizations require their staff to wear a uniform and pay attention to how they dress. They believe that with a formal and polite dress style, they can impress more efficiently to people. For example, in the insurance firms, shopping malls, banks and so on where the staffs have to work directly with customers, besides serving them with the best manner, a smart and beautiful dress will make them impressed and more pleased. In addition, when employees dress smartly they often will be more confident and also they can look more professional.
On the other hand, some workplaces care more about the quality of employees' performance and they do not expect members to wear formal clothes. At most of these organizations, staffs do not need to face the consumers so they can choose to wear whatever it is suitable for their working environment. most of the designers and programmers only focus on how to do their job perfectly to improve their company's efficiency and also most of the time they do not need to meet customers by themselves so they can wear casual clothes when working in their firms.
Overall, I think both these views might be true and these depend on where the employees work.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Most
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, look, so, for example, i think, in addition, no doubt, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1261.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83141762452 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59169844096 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540229885057 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 378.9 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.5979437204 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.636363636 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7272727273 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0909090909 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214363346735 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0965179706466 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492360382781 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152835474132 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409326933593 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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