Some people think government should focus on reducing environmental pollution and Housing problems to help people prevent illness and disease to what extent do you agree or disagreef
Pollution, that which is increasing rapidly, is the most threatening issue the world faeces today. Although, a certain number of people believe that it is good step by our national authority to do concentrate on high level of environmental pollution as well as housing problems to local people prevent different type of disease. I agree to the given statement and my inclination is justified in the following paragraph.
Out of all arguments, the strongest ine to prove my view is our atmosphere is make deteriorate by different type of pollution such as air pollution, noise pollution, water pollution and many more which air we take into the breath and become an unhealthy. Some of pollution do spread a lot of disease like malaria, dengue, heart problem and so on. I put another statement, Union organisation should make stringent rules against factories and companies which produce a number of bed chemicals water into the air. In addition, adultration is also produced by uses of more vehicles. For these, authority has to arrange more easy public transport so that can use it and reduce the uses of personal vehicle.
Following this, government should also see on decreased the housing effects to the present population. For example, in the the big cities, all people stay with the nuclear families which big issue for government to arrange the another resident area as well as should provide subsidies when they buy house. In my country our National Organisation do give Aawas Yojana for the accommodation of middle class families.
In a nutshell, my opinion on par with that the political unit of every country should make strict laws towards the environmental pollution as well as housing related problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, as to, for example, in addition, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.074204947 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85095294154 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575971731449 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.6711646003 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.666666667 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5833333333 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220574791934 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070980148386 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713474549361 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129390549217 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448748775265 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.