It is thought that the governments should concentrate on ways to diminish environmental pollution and tackle the housing problems to prevent illness and diseases. I believe that these problems are essential to deal with as soon as possible by both governments and inhabitants.
Day by day the environment is seriously polluted. Moreover, the amount of plastic waste ending up in the ocean increases rapidly due to lots of reasons. Covid-19, for instance, this pandemic has led to increased demand for single-use plastics such as masks, gloves and face shields. Alternatively, the rate of people who lived in rural areas migrated to bigger cities to look for good jobs is going up quickly. This could lead to houses increasing in price and rise in the crime rates.
Consequently, these reasons have an adverse impact on both the environment and people all over the world. Firstly, the more polluted the environment is, the more the quality of life declines. That is a reason why there is an increase in the rate of illness and diseases such as cancers, flu, respiratory diseases, and so on. Secondly, housing problems are becoming worse in modern life, which might lead to recession in a particular region in a country. As a result, in the future, humans could disappear or relapse into very small supply compared with demand. Therefore, governments need to focus on resolving problems early and quickly.
On the other hand, it is not only the government but also residents who have to support these problems. People should improve their awareness of using and putting plastic products in the right place. For example, not throw plastic bags, bottles, and so on to the lakes, rivers, and beaches, and limit the use of things made of plastic. In addition, businesses should build more factories and companies in the rural areas to make a lot of opportunities for inhabitants to decrease the number of people who go into the urban areas.
In conclusion, I argue that the government in each country should give more attention to reducing environmental pollution and problems about houses. Furthermore, citizens are responsible for addressing these problems with their authorities.
- The charts below show the results of a survey about what people of different age groups say makes them most happy 73
- The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries Summarise the information 67
- Children are facing more pressures nowadays from academic social and commercial perspectives What are the causes of these pressures and what measures should be taken to reduce these pressures 78
- The graph shows Japanese average monthly salary Yen from 1953 to 1983 and the prices of black and white television and color television during the same period 73
- Some people think government should focus on reducing environmental pollution and Housing problems to help people prevent illness and disease to what extent do you agree or disagreef 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 430, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'house'.
Suggestion: house
...is going up quickly. This could lead to houses increasing in price and rise in the cri...
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Line 3, column 639, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n resolving problems early and quickly. On the other hand, it is not only the go...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1824.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10924369748 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84339527744 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574229691877 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7546067894 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7894736842 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9473684211 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223239148332 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635943862335 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.070652440845 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13304064745 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0684519955504 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.