It is thought that residents should keep all their incomes and do not need to pay any taxes to the government. Personally, I think that paying taxes should be carried out adequately each year or month by all people living in a country to contribute to improve their nation and the quality of their life.
The fact that the government in most nations utilise taxes in developing countries and enhancing the living standards of inhabitants. Taxes are used for a variety of purposes. Firstly, they are allocated for maintaining and expanding public transport facilities such as repairing roads, highways or replacing the old public transports. Secondly, more diseases appeared in the world like COVID-19, so the authorities used taxes to research vaccines, medicine, and so on. Otherwise, they are utilized in fixing, buying and inventing health services. Thirdly, the government pays huge amounts of money each year for education to ensure all citizens are able to literate.
On the other hand, a part of income tax is paid for retirement and unemployment of inhabitants. It means that when people retire, the government will annually give them a retirement pension which is based on their income. Similarly, if a person loses jobs, this person will be supported by the government monthly until he or she has a new job. Therefore, residents should not keep all their incomes and should obey the laws that pay their taxes to the government.
In conclusion, I completely disagree citizens should keep all their earnings and not pay any taxes to the government, and furthermore taxes are beneficial for the development of the people and a nation itself.
- The charts below show the results of a survey about what people of different age groups say makes them most happy 73
- The diagram shows the stages of processing cocoa beans 73
- The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries Summarise the information 67
- Human activities have negative effects on plants and animals species Some people think that is too late to do anything about this problem Other people believe that effective measures can be taken to improve this situation Discuss both views and give yo 84
- Some people think government should focus on reducing environmental pollution and Housing problems to help people prevent illness and disease to what extent do you agree or disagreef 84
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, i think, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1380.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07352941176 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83704447741 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555147058824 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4237568814 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.153846154 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9230769231 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3846153846 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296863016411 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102469472892 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0960386351708 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199024125369 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0687168306396 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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